"you're talking about the melody of the last chorus- I see"

Actually no. I'm only talking about the melody of the bridge. Specifically the last line of the bridge. I think everything else is fine.

And I didn't mind the wait on the hook either. grin.

I think songwriters are like a big group out fishing and when one gets a hook everybody in the boat gets excited and starts yelling reel it in! grin.

There's also the old joke about the songwriter who hears their song on the radio and says you know I could've wrote that line better. LOL.

Keep up the great work.

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