"I lift my eyes to see, the man I’m meant to be
I’m stepping past the shadows that once followed me
I won’t speak that way again I’ve left that voice behind
I’m leaning on hope to clear my clouded mind"
Man, those are some clever "connect your own dots" lines.
The backwards guitar speaks to the Beatles vibe.
And Janice said she hears some Harrison in your vocal.

Excellent performances by you and a nice dynamic mix also.
We enjoyed it!
J&B
PS: We are struggling to keep up on the forum but will soon check out the first version.
