Originally Posted by rayc
Pretty cool writing, arrangement & performances.
The cadence of "And they were all getting rowdy" bothered me a little bit...but not much as there were plenty of other things to focus on.

THANKS, Ray! Well, you've once again singled out the line I'm proudest of as a point of bother. Ha! Guess that's just my burden to carry, and carry it I will. Know my phrasing is often eccentric. I like to imagine it's what sets me apart...for better or sometimes worse. But I'm not complaining (really!) and am glad you found other aspects of the song to your liking.

Very much appreciate the listen. Your reviews always sound from the heart, and I'm grateful you took the time. smile

Last edited by DC Ron; 10/28/25 03:13 PM.

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