I esp liked that your lyric was essentially rhyme-less, but the last line of the verse had a nice dual-rhyme that seemed to satisfy the listening ear for that rhyme...nice effect! I also liked the bridge chord changes. OVerall, a really good mix and arrangement. I like the instrumentation, too. Thanks for posting.


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