Originally Posted by Tano Music
I esp liked that your lyric was essentially rhyme-less, but the last line of the verse had a nice dual-rhyme that seemed to satisfy the listening ear for that rhyme...nice effect! I also liked the bridge chord changes. OVerall, a really good mix and arrangement. I like the instrumentation, too. Thanks for posting.
Thanks Tom. Yes, the go/know, away/play, talk/walk are deliberate and where I used RhymeZone. After spending a bit of time mixing and recording this song, the switch to the bridge chords still brings me joy.
Andrew