Hi Greg, this has a ton of potential. Great sound and groove.

I agree with Pat on everything he has stated so I will not be redundant.
I will add a couple of things. I’m assuming you are recording with a sequencer and not in BiaB. I would record each phrase separate and not try to sing the song in its entirety. Record a phrase, get it synced with the backing tracks them move to the next phrase. You may be doing this already and if so then just ignore it.

I believe you are trying to sing to many words in a short period of time. Hopefully you can accomplish this. If not you have but two choices; slow the song down as per Pat’s suggestion or cut out some of the words. Your choice.

Lastly whatever you do DO NOT change anything except the vocals. Everything else is absolutely perfect.


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