Originally Posted by TuneMonger
Smooth groove, easy on the ears, I liked it. Normally I don't like rhyming every line as you did on the chorus but it seemed fine here. Maybe would've liked to have heard more gambler lingo in the lyrics. Good tune, good vox, good job!

Thanks. I'm not a gambler but I did work in some blackjack lingo: bust the dealer, bring down the house, shoe, etc.

Fred


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