Hi, Tom.

I really like the introduction: catchy!

Glad you figured out a way to make this work.

Some suggestions to ignore, because you asked. wink

The line "I'm happy as a clam" feels a bit cliche.

Some of the line require specific knowledge of the listener:

At the coda I can break it out;
Fills and trills and screams and shouts;
Alto solo's overdue;
Call it my debut--
I'm your REED MAN.


I think they might work better with something more generic:

Waiting 'till I can break it out;
Fills and trills and screams and shouts;
My solo's hot 'cause I paid my dues;
Call it my debut--
I'm your REED MAN.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?