Donny, I think this is really good just as it is--why do anything with BIAB to it? I have noticed that I can do this with Suno--hand it something that was done either freeform, or recorded long ago pre-digital, and get an awesome result. Projects like that just aren't part of the BIAB community, but that's OK. If it were me, I'd leave it just as is. Only suggestion is that, in the lyric, the "per se" is a great rhyme, but I don't know how it ties into the idea. If it were me, I'd search for an equally good, but better-meaning phrase there. Other than that,--again, if it were me--I'd be super pleased with this just as it is!


Windows 11, Intel Core i5-8600T 2.3Ghz, 16 gig ram, BIAB 2025 MegaPak, SampleTank 4, Keystation49 Kybd, Neewer NW-800 mic