Tom,

I liked each and every song. They are all well written and you have done a great job performing them. Your vocals are simply too good to bury them in effects.

I'd like to give you some positive constructive criticism on the album. (not meant to bring your work down!) Most of it has to do with the production. In the vocals there are quite a lot of pops and other artifacts. These will no doubt all come from the mike set-up you're using and the room you're recording in. Most songs sound "compressed" to me. There's hardly any air in the sound. This has to do with giving each instrument it's own space in the mix and on the virtual stage. This can be done by cutting certain frequencies from each instrument, so that they don't get in each others space. Here's a link to an interactive EQ-sheet Very useful in determining which instrument needs which frequency-range.
After the mix is all done the production needs mastering.
In the song "deny me" I would have left the organ out in the intro and first verse, but that's personal taste I guess.

All in all you did good work on your album, you wrote solid and good songs and you have the vocals to back it up. Congratulations!

Mike
www.mikewever.nl