Link: Down My Personal Hell

In my pre-BIAB times, I wrote a nice little piano motif (simple chords, terribly sad melody) and successfully forgot about it.
Well, until a month ago.
I fell in love again with it, and decided to write some matching sad lyrics to it during my well earned vacation in Southern France.
While sitting on the porch at the beach, Mrs. inspiration came over to kiss me and after 2 hours and half a bottle
of really good French wine (could also be 1 hour and two half bottles of really good French wine) this song was born.
It's sad.
Really sad.
Sadness and silence instead of drums and drama.
No power-vocals, just a fragile girl who regrets.
And surreal lyrics, with lots of images and stuff.
As a fan of Roger Waters' Pink Floyd lyrics I've always wanted to do something like this.

Feedback (the good, the bad and the ugly, I'm here to learn) is, as always, highly appreciated.

The usual technical information:

Lyrical, mystical and surreal advisor and French wine connoisseur: Marty

Style: PNOFLOW.STY (the piano's gone, though)

The band:
Bass: 3786, me
Guitar: 2666, 3435, 3731, 3738, 4584, me
Synth: 1265, me
Vocals: 1x Suno, BG vocals 4x Synthesizer V

Track-Stats for those interested (Hi Ron smile ):
Code
 7x BIAB
11x me
 1x Suno

For those who have read this far:
After much discussion and consideration, I've come to the conclusion that it's not good for the future of this forum to post songs where most of the tracks were created with AI.
That's why I've decided for myself that, apart from vocals and _maybe_ an instrument that neither BIAB nor I can deliver, I will only release songs here that come exclusively from BIAB.
And, of course, my own noodling.
I'll still create other songs, but I will not post them in the PG forum.
You know where to find them.

You can find the lyrics in the next post.

Goldmania Bella
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