Sol Varon,
you've posted a dozen songs in about eleven days.
Slow down so folks can a) catch up to listen to your stuff & b) not have their own stuff pushed off page one.
Re this song you need to reduce the vocal reverb, (it's creating an auditory halo effect), do a little editing on levels as you clearly leaned back or turned away once or twice and that change in level came through.


Cheers
rayc
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