Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Hi BD!
You’ve done really well to create a song of a person numbed by their personal circumstances. I love the instrumentation choices. I was listening for a piano, given the origins of your song and the reference to it, but couldn’t hear one - but if I was listening without any other information, I wouldn’t be looking for it. The video is supportive also - the stillness of the image apart from the flickering flames reinforces the singer’s state of mind.
Great song!
Andrew
Thanks a lot for listening and for your detailed feedback, Andrew.
Much appreciated!

My original piano recording was used for the chord progression in BIAB and the singer's melody, but the main lick suited a clean arpeggio guitar sound much better, so I ended up leaving the piano out completely.