Hi Tom!
This is an intriguing song based on scripture! I think I would like it a lot, but have to admit the switching from one to the other made it harder to concentrate. I think, if the original has a good enough sound, it would be good to hear the original in full then contrast it to the AI interpretation - not to see which is best, but to hear how your original idea develops.
You’ve got some interesting ideas Tom - I like the way your mind works.
Andrew