Originally Posted by rayc
Nice work.
I though the cadence on "to be ready when you return." made the rhyme seem a little clunky. Had the voice moved down I think it'd have sounded better.
Nevertheless a REALLY cool production.

Thanks Ray for your kind feedback smile Thanks for pointing out the cadence, I wish some AI would recognize clunkiness in my music also, I just don't have natural ear for that.

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