Hi Bill and Marty!
I agree with others - I would like to have enjoyed it more if I could hear the vocals clearer - I'm not sure if it's volume or if more 'dry' vocal is needed to separate it from the fx, or EQ to remove muddiness? I can't tell. Some really good elements are there, and I can see what Ron means by the riff from 'Gloria' by Them - I'm not sure if it's an exact match but it is reminiscent at least, but you made it your own and it fitted right in. Very catchy chorus line 'I'll see ya son'.
Andrew