Hi Jona,

A lovely song, a nice funky melody and a funny story about you sang the lyrics other than had to.
Sometimes that happens to me too, though just some words. In my last song I had to sing what is going through my mind, but instead I used 'heart' and decide to leave it that way. No one noticed. I think here it will be the same. Your vocals shine and the song was joyful.

But speaking about that, during the time I listened to the song I was wondering if the song wasn't too joyful, compared with the lyrics.
Don't you think the song should have been a little more subdued?

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130