Excellent songwriting! Loved the word pictures, the rhyme scheme, the melody was perfect for what you were doing, and the performance so professional!
The one comment i'd have...BIAB's "horn section" is good for background, but it comes off as kind of blocked and computer-y if you try to use it as a solo section. I'd maybe select a solo RT to put on top of that portion.
Enjoyed it thoroughly!


Windows 11, Intel Core i5-8600T 2.3Ghz, 16 gig ram, BIAB 2025 MegaPak, SampleTank 4, Keystation49 Kybd, Neewer NW-800 mic