I am enjoying reading R.W's lyric - and wondering what you might do with them...
His lyrics take me to new places. As do your melodies...
Y'all knocked this one outta the park. Strong.

Dig that opening guitar!
Bass & drums land perfectly. Love the sound of both.
Nice jangly.
Cool BGVs.
Strong vocal. Immediacy. Sweet harmony.
Excellent Production. And Mix.

I Really Like this.

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