Fred, liked your song alot. There are some lyrical gems in there, like "count your coins"..great work there.
The tone seems to be very introspective and IMO asks for a gentle, subtle mix.
The pad seems to my ears to be too pronounced...I'd have softened it to compliment the sentiment of the song...I'd have used some soft strings..
Excellent composition and great delivery.
Thanks for posting.


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