Originally Posted by camog
Hi Mario - congratulations on this lovely piece, you are heading into a very interesting direction
with the classical instruments and arrangement! Have you come across Christian Henson on YT
who is a very able & experienced composer/teacher of orchestral scoring:
- many free tutorials on YT by him, my guess is
he'll really fire up your progress and hopefully inspire you?
I liked your choice of chords, instruments and the arrangement - very nicely done!
Two small gripes if you'll allow me - at 0.44, 4.24 and 5.40 the melody line notes don't quite fit the
underlying harmony (to my ears anyway)? You play the melody lines quite 'staccato', wondering
whether the feel of the whole piece might be improved by playing the melodies in a more 'flowing'
fashion, softly from note to note with more 'feel'?
Well done Mario - looking forward to more classical masterpieces from you!!
Best, Carl

Thanx Carl for listening and commenting. I bookmarked your video suggestion. I'll check those areas that concerned you. It maybe that I used some chord extensions in those areas. I have "weird" hearing at times as I do like using those extensions, but they probably don't really work in genres like this. That is unless you are like me and my hearing!

I'm no longer allowed to go caroling at the psych hospital.
I guess Do You Hear What I Hear was a bad song choice!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware