Hi Carl!
There are many parts of your piece that I like:
  • Drum track - nice and steady, a bit of skip to it, but providing a good bedrock
  • The ‘swell’ I could hear around 3:55 and 4:55
  • How you create familiarity for the listener by using the same or similar melody phrasing in both rhythm and pitch
  • The ending on a minor chord
  • The subtle steel guitar in the background (thank goodness)
  • Of course, your usual excellent chord progression

Wonderful to listen to!
Andrew