Hi Brian!
I like the way you lifted and mellowed from one section to another to provide contrast between sections, and how you ‘wove’ different instrument sections without it feeling forced or stark. ‘Cohesive’ or ‘seamless’ are words that come to mind.

I’m interested in how the song title came about - did you have the title early and write to the title or did the music conjur that title? Or, being a singer, did the title feature in the melody phrasing somewhere - this is often how it happens for me.

Anyway, really good to listen to.
Andrew