Nice Bass!

Dave sounds great (like Dave).

Your vocal on this is extra good.

And a good write.
"I realize my youth is done, so I shoot Time a flare."
"As I aged I grew to care so little for so much..."
Worth the price of admission.
But this:
"If we concentrate upon the here and now,
the where and when would stand aside.
If we live without the if and how,
we wouldn't question why."
...really puts it over the top.

fj