Rob,

LOVE this!
NO. LOVE These! Both.

Cool BAND tracks. Excellent arrangement/production. Nice choices.
Excellent mix.

Listening to the first (dark) lyric, I thought..."This is some FINE writing!!"

Listening to the second (happy), I thought WOW! This is even BETTER.
There is more packed into those 12 lines than most folks could manage in 12 pages.
Amazing SongWriting.
IMPRESSED.

fj