So totally excellent, in every regard. Loved the lyric, delivery, choice of construction with the various RT's and live stuff. All around top-notch.
And the lyric-story is very appealing.
I esp liked the tag at the end with the city names.
Only "improvement" suggestion I can make...the phrase "rat RACE" seems a bit forced, placing the accent on the wrong element. If it were mine, I'd look for a more natural line-ending where that emphasis fits a bit better...a nit, but it would bother me.


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