Originally Posted by BlueAttitude
Excellent song, Marty, I fell in love with the feel of this one right from the start.

Thanks to everyone that mentioned my bit, always good to know that some people actually like the guitar enough to mention it eek
Thanks, Dave. Your love sounds great.

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Wow.
The flow and timing of your song is perfect.
Great song, great vocals, and a great mix.
You're both in top form and doing what you do best!
Carpe diem...
Thanks, Brain.

Originally Posted by floyd jane
Nice Bass!

Dave sounds great (like Dave).

Your vocal on this is extra good.

And a good write.
"I realize my youth is done, so I shoot Time a flare."
"As I aged I grew to care so little for so much..."
Worth the price of admission.
But this:
"If we concentrate upon the here and now,
the where and when would stand aside.
If we live without the if and how,
we wouldn't question why."
...really puts it over the top.

fj
Ah, thanks so much, Floyd. "...and so much for so little." Man, I can't believe --no I can believe cuz it's-- you latched onto the lyrics in the Bridge. I learned long ago (mostly through photography) that I really can't take credit for creations "I" make. Lyrics just roll out when needed, and often don't even make sense to me. When the Bridge rolled out with these I read and re-read them again to be sure it was as sensible as it seemed.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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