Ray,

This sounds really good to me! It's a clean production that to my ears, has been given a lot of TLC!
Love the bass sound/tone! very creative use of vocal effects...I love that kind of stuff!
The melodic change in the chorus is beautiful!

As I listened at the end the thought crossed my mind that it would have been worth considering a reverse cymbol/hihat crash that ends abruptly cold stop with all instruments! But hey that's just my weird thinking at work!

Enjoyed it! Take care, TB