No, not bad, Mario, it's excellent! The music, etc, is superb - it'd be fun to hear someone like Astrud Gilberto singing it! - but your vocals give it authenticity.


Some favourite Waoist Adages:
#1: Play on the Way.
#13: Ask not for whom the flower blooms, it blooms for you.
#58: Bring consciousness to it.
#63: On the road to effortlessness, effort must be made.
#92: Be Love Now, the rest will come on its own.