Torrey, Laurent, Andrew..thanks so much for listening and the feedback.
Andrew, I’m a lyric and rhyme purist, for sure…but sometimes you have to let go of that in order to deliver the message. I feel like keeping the rhyme scheme is more important with songs at tempo and less important in slower works like this—I guess I’m hoping that the listeners mind has already forgotten what came before!! But it’s a very good analysis, and I feel honored that you took the time to reflect on it!


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