Originally Posted by TuneMonger
I really like the cadence of the lines, and of course, your singing was perfect. Why'd she split? IMWTK. Oh well, made for a good song. Excellent work as always.
Well, I can tell ya for a fact that The Enquirer has no clue, Bob. But here's the skinny: One night she was painting the night sky and ran out of indigo. The rest is his story.

Originally Posted by Knee Wobbler
Hi there Marty,

You know I could imagine Elvis singing this…… Elvis Costello. Perhaps not quite like “Alison”, but certainly in that soft, low key approach he had on a couple of songs. Really liked that robotic vocal in the break/bridge… thought you were going to break into a rendition of “Mr Blue Sky” with it!! Another good write and production from you.

Kind regards.
Ha, I could get along with Costello better than Abbot. But who was on first? The King. Ha, I like your direction there, Lee. Mr. Blue Sky. Excellent choice. As Mario would say, "What's so funny about peace, love and understanding?" Happy Christmas, man. Glad you're here.

Originally Posted by floyd jane
....girl gets over it. HAHAHA

Mmmm, sweet bass.
Good BAND. Had to look back to see what that solo was...nice...
Good mix.
Well sung.

fj
Thanks, Floyd. Yep. She got over it. The sand in her hands was wet and dirty --lost its luster, Buster.

Originally Posted by Torrey Bliss
Marty,

I always find your songs so entertaining! The lyrics are great....painting quite a picture!
Nice little vocal effects treatment in the middle...I'll have to borrow that on a future tune!
Vocals and bass work are fantastic!

Take care, TB
Thanks, Torrey. Funny, I just finished another one with similar Bridge treatment. I'd much prefer to hear what you come up with.


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marty

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