Originally Posted by Birchwood
In a way, it's a cheerful song, Andrew! Despite most of the lyrics. The choruses especially gave me that feeling! I really liked that!

I think it's a really good song.
I do have a suggestion: Maybe, just maybe, it would be stronger if you didn't end so high too often (sing the endings of some lines lower or neutral).
But maybe others here on the forum disagree, or you don't. Then leave it as is, because the song is simply good.

A creative 2026, Andrew!
Hans
Thank you Hans! Re the high endings, this is what I like about this forum - others hear things that you yourself don’t. I am thinking of doing a final mix at some point in the future so I’ll give your suggestion a road test.
Glad you liked the song, and I have more lining up to be finalised soon so hopefully I’ll be able to post one per fortnight.
Looking forward to some good songs from you as well - coming out of your studio rebuild.
Happy new year!
Andrew

Regards,
Andrew D
Adelaide, Sth Aust
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