Hi, Joe.

Fun song! smile

The lyrics were a bit cramped, but that's no biggie. But as Andrew suggested, I'd consider dropping one of the busy guitars, because it's fighting for attention and getting in the way of hearing the lyrics.

I enjoyed the listen!


-- David Cuny

My virtual singer development blog
Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?

BiaB 2025 | Windows 11 | Reaper | Way too many VSTis.