Cool exercise, Lee. Nice job sustaining the snappy musicality of your song throughout. Love your (doubled?) vocals and where you have them in the mix. Though I LOVE lyrics that rhyme, they of course don't have to. The song just has to SOUND pleasing, and this is quite pleasing indeed. Good use of BiaB soloists, too, though the ending sounds unresolved to my (68 year old) ears. Nice one!

My grandfather's farm was on a red clay road in the southern United States. The iron content of the soil was so high you could pick up small rocks with a toy magnet. Kids today just don't have that kind of fun any more...


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
ASUS I9-12900K DAW, 32 GB RAM
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)