I'm always a fan of experimenting with rhyme schemes, or eliminating them altogether. I really like this song, especially that uber-catchy chorus! Best use of heys and oohs that I've ever heard on here. Kept listening to it over and over. You've got a great tune here, congratulations. The BIAB guitars fit perfectly, sounded like Stephen Stills. The first time I heard the ending it seemed abrupt. But listening again, it felt like an artistic choice - worked for me.


Windows 11, Intel Core I5 10400, 16 gig ram, Scarlett 2i2, Sony Acid Music Studio 10, BIAB 2020 UltraPlus Pak