Yes, a fun song and there's nothing wrong with that, but the busy words were a tough listen for me. Somehow you can tell this story more musically, I'm sure, if you work on it. Good vocals and the song has a nice spirit to it.

Last edited by TuneMonger; 01/05/26 04:36 AM.

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