The only rhyme was the final couplet of each verse, that was cool. Lot of well-turned phrases, as always. "There's a pull in the dirt and the stone" was one of my favorites. I loved how you all but spoke one line in the middle of each verse, that was brilliant. Strong production, too. Great work!


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