Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, BD.

Excellent work. Sounds like a song to me!

AI sings expressively, and the setting is exquisite. The lyrics are touching, especially:

I pay with a bill
I press the change into the hand of one of the two
And wish him a nice evening
He wishes me the same and smiles at me
No teeth
I take out my wallet again and give him what I can spare


It works for me. Well done.
Thanks for your kind comment, David, especially about the lyrics, because that's the part of songwriting I've worked hardest on improving over the last year.
Much appreciated smile