Man, I really like the lyrics, Joe. And the chorus harmony is perfect both in pitch and feeling. Very clever write, and very enjoyable. I might've jazzed up the drums a bit, but this is fun from beginning to end, Joe. I searched for your original one, but couldn't find it.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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