Hi David!
A second listen allowed me to get a glimpse of all small touches here and there that add to this song. I particularly like the touches at the end of the verses (where the holds are). This song could easily be used in a TV series or the credit roll on a Hallmark movie - and I mean this in the best sense - heartwarming.

I like the Nashville Swing drums, and would have preferred a touch more bass volume and movement in the chorus - but that’s me.

I think we need to start two forum petitions:
1. David to sing
2. Write without maj7 chords

A lot of effort has gone into this song, as evidenced by your extensive (liked by me) write up.

Well done and enjoyed it.

Andrew