You know I like the little rocker Floyd in you, and this song is no exception.
Great lyrics/story and one of your best vocal performances I've heard so far.
Extremely energetic drive thanks to your prosody and choice of drums/bass and guitars - Rodney knows exactly what he's doing.
And even though fading out a song is sooo 2013 :), I still dig the outro because the piano is fantastic.
As far as production goes, it's ready for prime time, I wouldn't change a thing.
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