Hi, B.D.
Excellent sound, but the vocal is uncomfortably
crispy to my ears. Then again, I'm getting over a cold, so that might have some influence.
Other than that, nothing bad to say: good write, good production, sounds great.
Well, the emphasis on the first word feels like it falls on the
second syllable instead of the first, because the second pitch is higher, which is weird to my brain. And that's being
really nit-picky.

Nicely done!