Hi John!
I like the style you've chosen for this song - particularly the 'mechanical' sound to the percussion - I'm assuming that's the loop you've used? Your Fivrr singer and accompaniment gives it a folk feel. The melody has a whimsical feel to it, albeit serious and heartfelt. It made me feel like it was saying 'I'm gonna pretend it doesn't matter, but deep down it really does.'
I like it!
Andrew