Hi Bob and Joliz!

You have a knack of writing that paints a picture or provides a snippet, but with enough space to be able to read between the lines. Joliz’ vocal provides a constant yet melancholy feel to the music, and I love it when the B3 enters almost like a musical expression of time.

Your title is interesting as it is an incidental item that takes on such profound significance in the relationship. Its use *almost* bookends the song. There’s a sadness that the first person ‘I’ wants something different from the second person ‘you’ - their paths intersect at that place but in so many ways, going in different directions. Hmmm. I know it’s a song, but I do wish the best for the first person that he will find someone that will take his heart (if the pronoun is correctly assumed).

Andrew

Regards,
Andrew D
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