Bob,

One of the first things I noticed is there are no rhymes in the lyric. And I kind of like that - it colors a bit outside the lines ... and that's how music progresses. Two classic songs I can think of had no rhymes in the lyric: 1. Moonlight In Vermont - one of my all-time favorites. 2. Proud Mary. They did pretty good!

This classic you. Your unique voice and folky style work perfectly for you. Another masterpiece in song writing.

Take care, Alan


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