I like this song. So much is good about it.

Just my opinion: I think you should revisit the mix. On my system, it doesn't sound clean. I went through to see that I wasn't running anything at 100% thereby causing the issue on my end, I wasn't. There is a distorted quality to the mix like you have gain staging set up wrong or have it overly compressed/limited/maximized in the outputs.... Anyway, I'd have a look at that, remove the plugs and remix it.


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