Hi Dave (and Marty and Chris)
I like the layering of instruments as they each take their turn to come in. The intro contains a lead guitar motif or variants thereof that reappear throughout the song - adds a continuity which reinforces a long travel. Good use of 100/200/300 in the chorus and also heard other lines omitted from the chorus each, and this changed each chorus - still sounding familiar but different.
A good write, good singing and good playing - really good to listen to.
Andrew