Hello John,

I think this is the first time I've heard a song by you. That's because of me, of course.
But you had me hooked when I read that you were inspired by the Bee Gees' sound. I've been a fan for years (been one, because there's not much left of them).

At first, I wanted to tease you by saying your vocals should be much higher..."
But that's a bit lame. Seriously though: I was surprised by your singing. It's very pleasant to listen to, even in a song with a lot of overdrive.

What I would have done in your place is use harmony vocals in the choruses. That gives the song an extra dynamic boost!
But even without that, you've created a beautiful song, with clever lyrics and a joy to listen to!

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130