Hi Chris,

J’aim’rais croire cet artiste, et moi aussi, Chris!
What a nice story you made here!

It started so simple, but than becomes a nice story. I had to use Google often...
Your song is also very nice and with a good funky tempo.
I recognized some of the real tracks. They are lovely to use.

But the vocals? Did you use AI or is it a real female singer? It's a very good voice!
There is one little thing I didn't like so much.
When she sings "Hier soir, à une terrasse, j’avais sûrement l’air triste" the chords went downwards (on terrasse) and took away the positive tension you were building up. And you did that 1 or 2 times more in the song.
If I had to make this song I wouldn't do that, but stay in the same chord or going higher.
But... I am not the maker of this song, that's you. And you had ideas why you did it, I bet.

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130