Lots here to like. You definitely chose the right music and instruments to convey the messages in the hard-hitting lyrics. Good write.

And you keep it interesting with varying parts and changes. Everything works well and sounds good, including your vocals.


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https://www.youtube.com/@ScottHOlson

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